Kitin threat observation camps - Revision history

Dorothée at 04:06, 10 June 2022

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Elke: /* Localisation */ It's more intuitive if image description is below images

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‎Localisation: It's more intuitive if image description is below images

Leda at 18:41, 2 June 2022

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Dorothée at 16:16, 2 June 2022

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Zamoor at 14:15, 2 June 2022

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Dorothée: /* History */

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Dorothée at 22:28, 1 June 2022

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Dorothée: /* Staff */

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Dorothée: /* Personnel */

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+|DE = Lager zur Beobachtung der Kitin-Bedrohung |DEs= 4
 |EN = Kitin threat observation camps |ENs= 4
 |ES = Campos de observación de la amenaza Kitin |ESs= 5

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 ! Sub-continent<br />Camp 0 !! Camp 1 !! Camp 2 !! Camp 3 !! Camp 4  !! Camps 5 & 6
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-| [[Burning Desert]]<br />[[Imperial Dunes]] ||[[Oflovak's Oasis]] || [[Frahar Towers]] || [[Outlaw Canyon]] ||  [[Savage Dunes]]  || [[Scorched Corridor]] (×2)
+| [[Aeden Aqueous]]<br />[[Liberty Lake]] || [[Winds of Muse]] || [[Resting Water]] || [[Bounty Beaches]] || [[Enchanted Isle]] || [[Lagoons of Loria]] (×2)
 |- style="text-align:center;"
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 |- style="text-align:center;"
-| [[Witherings]]<br />[[Cities of Intuition]] || [[Maiden Grove]] || [[Haven of Purity]] || [[Grove of Umbra]] || [[Knot of Dementia]] || [[Void]] (×2)
+| [[Burning Desert]]<br />[[Imperial Dunes]] ||[[Oflovak's Oasis]] || [[Frahar Towers]] || [[Outlaw Canyon]] ||  [[Savage Dunes]]  || [[Scorched Corridor]] (×2)
 |- style="text-align:center;"
 | <img src="https://api.bmsite.net/maps/static?center=9035,-3032&zoom=7&language=en&markers=icon:lm_marker|color:0xef4e4e|label:Camp%200|9200,-3257&maptype=atys&mapmode=world&size=100x100 " >
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 |- style="text-align:center;"
-| [[Verdant Heights]]<br />[[Majestic Garden]] || [[Fleeting Garden]] || [[Knoll of Dissent]] || [[Hidden Source]] || [[Heretic's Hovel]] || [[Grove of Confusion]] (×2)
+| [[Witherings]]<br />[[Cities of Intuition]] || [[Maiden Grove]] || [[Haven of Purity]] || [[Grove of Umbra]] || [[Knot of Dementia]] || [[Void]] (×2)
 |- style="text-align:center;"
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-|DE = Beobachtungslager zur Kitine-Bedrohung |DEs= 5
+|DE = Beobachtungslager zur Kitine-Bedrohung |DEs= 4
 |EN = Kitin threat observation camps |ENs= 4
 |ES = Campos de observación de la amenaza Kitin |ESs= 5

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+|Tab-1={{3DText|text='''Kitin threat observation camps'''}}
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 |DE = Beobachtungslager zur Kitine-Bedrohung |DEs= 5
 |EN = Kitin threat observation camps |ENs= 4
-|ES = Campos de observación de la amenaza de Kitin |ESs= 5
+|ES = Campos de observación de la amenaza Kitin |ESs= 5
 |FR = Camps d'observation de la menace Kitine |FRs= 0
 |RU = Лагеря наблюдения за угрозой Китин |RUs= 5

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 <poem>        Despite these considerable efforts the camps did not prevent the [[Second Swarm]], but perhaps limited its harmful effects. They were of course rebuilt by the nations after the return from the [[Second Exodus]] in [[2570]]. <ref>[[:Category:Chronicles “Go back the shadows”]]</ref> .
-     Their activity is still necessary today. It is thanks to them that invasions, especially from the [[Kitins of the Depths]] can be contained.
+     Their activity is still necessary today. It is, thanks to them, that invasions, especially from the [[Kitins of the Depths]], can be contained.
 </poem>

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-}}{{WIP}}{{Trad
+}}{{Trad
 |DE = Beobachtungslager zur Kitine-Bedrohung |DEs= 5
-|EN = Kitin threat observation camps |ENs= 1
+|EN = Kitin threat observation camps |ENs= 4
 |ES = ampos de observación de la amenaza de Kitin |ESs= 5
 |FR = Camps d'observation de la menace Kitine |FRs= 0

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 * Zoraï theocracy:
 ** Representative Zoraï, ''Zora'' : Ba-Ci Du (étable)
-** frontier supplier, ''Base camp'' : Ja-Zung Geng.
+** Frontier supplier, ''Base camp'' : Ja-Zung Geng.
 ** Prospector,  ''Base camp'' : Xo-Yuang Fuangi.
 ** Contremaîtres: Ki-Ke Piang, ''Camp 1'' ; Luoi Pei-Ziao, ''Camp 2'' ; Qai-ci Du, ''Camp 3'' ; Sai-Fuang Du, ''Camp 4'' ; Sai-Fuang Sun, ''Camp 5'' ; Si-Tin Ki, ''Camp 6''.

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      Materials, parcel deliveries... the nations [[Kitin threat observation camps/OOC|generously reward]] the volunteers who take on this thankless and risky task.
 </poem><blockquote>
-=== Personnel ===
+=== Staff ===
 <poem>    Each capital city provides an informing officer, who can be recognised not far from the entrance to the city by his title of ''“representative”''. He informs the homins about the needs of the camps and directs them to the base camp in the region. He is also responsible for [[Kitin threat observation camps/OOC|rewarding particularly deserving volunteers]].
      The observation camps are all organised in the same way, depending on the intensity of the threat: The base camps are located in the least dangerous regions, close to the capitals. The base camps are located in the less dangerous regions, close to the capitals. The camps in the higher risk regions will be supplied by those responsible for supplying the camps: