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Maimatena: English grammar. I'm not sure what the "And all that," sentence means.

2022-08-24T03:26:06Z

English grammar. I'm not sure what the "And all that," sentence means.

Dorothée at 13:49, 17 August 2022

2022-08-17T13:49:32Z

Zorroargh at 13:06, 6 April 2022

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Zorroargh at 12:46, 6 April 2022

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Zorroargh at 12:40, 6 April 2022

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Zorroargh at 12:08, 6 April 2022

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Zorroargh at 13:25, 5 April 2022

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Zorroargh at 13:21, 5 April 2022

2022-04-05T13:21:44Z

Zorroargh at 10:27, 5 April 2022

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Zorroargh at 10:23, 5 April 2022

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 |palette=OOC
 |content='''Immerse yourself in the world of Atys'''
-;[[Portal: Lore|The ''Lore'']]: cultural heritage, defining the framework of the "official" role-playing.
+;[[Portal: Lore|The ''Lore'']]: Defining the framework for "official" role-playing.
-;[[Portal:The Great Library|The Great Library]]: A joint work on all topics written by everyone, those who play and those who lock themselves in the ''engine room'' of Ryzom: [[Portal:Atys/Planet|geography]], [[Portal:The Great Library/History|history]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Sciences|sciences]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Literature|literature]]...
+;[[Portal:The Great Library|The Great Library]]: A joint work on all topics written by everyone, both those who play and those who lock themselves in the ''engine room'' of Ryzom: [[Portal:Atys/Planet|geography]], [[Portal:The Great Library/History|history]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Sciences|sciences]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Literature|literature]]...
 :As well as specific topics such as: [[ecosystems|ecosystems]], [[Portal:Atys/Races|races]], [[Portal:Atys/Tribes|tribes]], [[Portal:Civilization|nations and organizations]], [[Portal:Factions|factions and religions]]...
 ;[[Portal:Game/Glossary|Glossary]]: [[Glossary of RP Terms|Glossary of RP Terms]]
 : [[:Category:Glossary|Collection of small glossaries]]
 [[File:Matis batiment.gif|180px|center]]
-And for the most curious: the archives: [[Portal:X-files/Archives]]
+And for the most curious, the archives: [[Portal:X-files/Archives]]
 }}
 {{TheBigBox
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 |image=R2_scenario_admin.png
 |palette=OOC
-|content=[[File:Arme Matis.png|80px|right]]To find out how to play: fight, make magic, collect raw material and craft items.
+|content=[[File:Arme Matis.png|80px|right]]To learn the core elements of the game: fighting, making magic, collecting raw materials, and crafting items.
 ;'''<span style="font-family: fantasy, cursive;">Follow the guide!</span>'''
-:To begin with, '''the [[User Manual|Ryzom Manual]]'''. Follow these simple step-by-step instructions to become a master.<br/>
+:To begin with, see '''the [[User Manual|Ryzom Manual]]'''. Follow these simple step-by-step instructions to become a master.<br/>
-And all that, in automatic adventures or created and organized by the animation team.<br/>
+And all that, in automatic adventures or those created and organized by the animation team.<br/>
 ;At the beginning: Your first steps will take you to Silan. '''[[Silan Guide|Your learning will begin here]].<br/>
 ;Read [[Portal:Game/Community|the Ryzom Code of Conduct]]: There is no synergy without common rules.<br/>
@@ Line 90: / Line 90: @@
 : '''[[Forge Portal/Projects|The Project]]'''
 : '''[[Forge Portal/Tools|The Tools]]''':
-; [[:Category: Tutorials|And other tutorials]]: these will help you understand the basics of the game.
+; [[:Category: Tutorials|And other tutorials]]: will help you understand the basics of the game.
 ; History of patches: [[:Category:Updates]]
 : [[Ryzom API]] documents...
@@ Line 100: / Line 100: @@
 {{3DText|3D=shadow|text=<big>'''Do you want to discover more about the world of Ryzom?'''</big>}}
-In this case, take a walk through the various topics offered on the {{3DText|text='''main portals of the Ryzom Wiki, the EncyclopAtys'''}}, shown in the cartridge below and which you will often find elsewhere at the bottom of the various portals.
+Take a walk through the various topics offered on the {{3DText|text='''main portals of the Ryzom Wiki, the EncyclopAtys'''}}, shown in the cartridge below and which you will often find elsewhere at the bottom of the various portals.
 </div>
 {{clear}}{{Portal bottom|Amber}}

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 |palette=OOC
 |content='''Immerse yourself in the world of Atys'''
-;[[Portal: Lore|The ''Lore'']]: cultural heritage, defining the framework of the "oficial" role-playing.
+;[[Portal: Lore|The ''Lore'']]: cultural heritage, defining the framework of the "official" role-playing.
 ;[[Portal:The Great Library|The Great Library]]: A joint work on all topics written by everyone, those who play and those who lock themselves in the ''engine room'' of Ryzom: [[Portal:Atys/Planet|geography]], [[Portal:The Great Library/History|history]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Sciences|sciences]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Literature|literature]]...
 :As well as specific topics such as: [[ecosystems|ecosystems]], [[Portal:Atys/Races|races]], [[Portal:Atys/Tribes|tribes]], [[Portal:Civilization|nations and organizations]], [[Portal:Factions|factions and religions]]...

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 <div class="mw-collapsible mw-collapsed" style="text-align:center;">
-<!--{{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''''Ausklappen'' Sie für zusätzliche Forschungs- und Arbeitsnotizen'''</big></big></big>}}
+<!--{{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''''Ausklappen'' Sie für zusätzliche Forschungs- und Arbeitsnotizen'''</big></big></big>}}-->
-{{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''''Expand'' for additional research and work notes'''</big></big></big>}}-->
+{{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''''Expand'' for additional research and work notes'''</big></big></big>}}
-{{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''''Expandir'' para notas adicionales de investigación y trabajo'''</big></big></big>}}
+<!--{{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''''Expandir'' para notas adicionales de investigación y trabajo'''</big></big></big>}}
-<!--{{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''Notes complémentaires de recherche et de travail affichable à volonté'''</big></big></big>}}
+{{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''Notes complémentaires de recherche et de travail affichable à volonté'''</big></big></big>}}
 {{3DTitle|3D=outset|group=Amber|text=<big><big><big>'''Дополнительные примечания и отображаемых на волю'''</big></big></big>}}-->
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 {{3DText|3D=shadow|text=<big>'''Do you want to discover more about the world of Ryzom?'''</big>}}
-In this case, take a walk through the various topics offered on the {{3DText|text='''main portals of the Ryzom Wiki, the EncyclopAtys,'''}} shown in the cartridge below and which you will often find elsewhere at the bottom of the various portals.
+In this case, take a walk through the various topics offered on the {{3DText|text='''main portals of the Ryzom Wiki, the EncyclopAtys'''}}, shown in the cartridge below and which you will often find elsewhere at the bottom of the various portals.
 </div>
 {{clear}}{{Portal bottom|Amber}}

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 {{3DText|3D=shadow|text=<big>'''Do you want to discover more about the world of Ryzom?'''</big>}}
-In this case, take a walk through the various topics offered on the {{3DText|text='''main portals of the Ryzom Wiki, the EncyclopAtys.'''}} shown in the cartridge below and which you will often find elsewhere at the bottom of the various portals.
+In this case, take a walk through the various topics offered on the {{3DText|text='''main portals of the Ryzom Wiki, the EncyclopAtys,'''}} shown in the cartridge below and which you will often find elsewhere at the bottom of the various portals.
 </div>
 {{clear}}{{Portal bottom|Amber}}

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 |content='''Immerse yourself in the world of Atys'''
 ;[[Portail: Lore|The ''Lore'']]: cultural heritage, defining the framework of the "oficial" role-playing.
-;[[Portail:The Great Library|The Great Library]]: A joint work on all topics written by everyone, those who play and those who lock themselves in the ''engine room'' of Ryzom: [[Portal:Game/Roleplay|geography]], [[Portal:The Great Library/History|history]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Sciences|sciences]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Literature|literature]]...
+;[[Portail:The Great Library|The Great Library]]: A joint work on all topics written by everyone, those who play and those who lock themselves in the ''engine room'' of Ryzom: [[Portal:Atys/Planet|geography]], [[Portal:The Great Library/History|history]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Sciences|sciences]], [[Portal:The Great Library/Literature|literature]]...
 :As well as specific topics such as: [[ecosystems|ecosystems]], [[Portal:Atys/Races|races]], [[Portal:Atys/Tribes|tribes]], [[Portal:Civilization|nations and organizations]], [[Portal:Factions|factions and religions]]...
 ;[[Portal:Game/Glossary|Glossary]]: [[Glossary of RP Terms|Glossary of RP Terms]]

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+{{Tabs
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