The Legend of the first living sword - Revision history

Nilstilar at 18:46, 23 December 2022

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Lanstiril at 08:45, 31 May 2022

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Acridiel at 22:18, 3 October 2021

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Lanstiril at 14:32, 8 November 2020

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Lanstiril at 11:14, 8 November 2020

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Lanstiril at 11:10, 8 November 2020

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Lanstiril at 13:53, 7 November 2020

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Craftjenn at 19:28, 4 November 2020

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Craftjenn at 19:14, 4 November 2020

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-<small><span id=Dav>''This tale has been told by [[User:Lylanea Vicciona|Lylanea]] on [[Anlor Winn/Storytelling JA2610|2610 Anlor Winn Convention]].'' (OOC : Halloween 2020)''</span></small>
+<div align=center><small><span id=Dav>''This tale has been told by [[User:Lylanea Vicciona|Lylanea]] on [[Anlor Winn/Storytelling JA2610|2610 Anlor Winn Convention]].'' (OOC : Halloween 2020)''</span></small>
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 |DE =Die Legende vom ersten lebenden Schwert
 |EN =The_Legend_of_the_first_living_sword
 |FR =La légende de la première épée vivante
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 <small><span id=Dav>''This tale has been told by [[User:Lylanea Vicciona|Lylanea]] on [[Anlor Winn/Storytelling JA2610|2610 Anlor Winn Convention]].'' (OOC : Halloween 2020)''</span></small>
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 [[Category:Tales]]
-[[Category:Halloween]]
+<noinclude>{{Portal|Literature|Animation}}
-{{Portal|Literature}}
+[[Category:Tales and Legends of Anlor Winn]] [[Category:Halloween 2020]]</noinclude>

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 <big>— YES! she shouted with all her might.</big><br />
 <big>— So be it! So you shall be with your beloved! As long as he lives and after his death you shall be an instrument of death even in death! But you shall experience the joys of battle only when you kill those whom you have loved! </big></q>
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 An irrepressible pain tore through the wrathful soul of the Fyra.
 Varro knelt in the damp moss of the primordial roots and held the dying body of his beloved homin in bloodstained arms. For a long time he cried for her and around him even the beasts of the underworld were silent, as if a god had ordered them to do so. Eventually he stood up and began to clean the Fyras body. He looked around. - So much senseless death.
 He would give a dignified farewell to all the warriors who died here today, even if it would take days. Then he became aware of a new, soft bubbling sound. It sounded a bit like drops falling into  water. He looked around and became aware of his newly made sword. It lay beside the warrior's body. Its blade in a pool of her blood. Green drops of Sap mixed with the warrior's lifeblood, which slowly but steadily disappeared into the sword… He had done it. The sword lived and drank the blood of its victims. Varro picked up the weapon. It snuggled into his hand, as if it wanted to be close to him. He made a few strokes through the stuffy air, filled with the smell of death, and the blade sliced it with a sound like a lover's sigh. As he thrust the sword into the soft ground, a shiver went through the blade. Like a body under the caress of a lover. But Varro found no joy in it. He had lost the love of his life to blind hate and greed. As long as he lived, he would never again raise his hand in battle against a homin.

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-<small><span id=Dav>''This tale has been told by [[User:Lylanea Vicciona|Lylanea]] on 2610 [[Anlor Winn]] Convention.'' (OOC : Halloween 2020)''</span></small>
+<small><span id=Dav>''This tale has been told by [[User:Lylanea Vicciona|Lylanea]] on [[Anlor Winn/Storytelling JA2610|2610 Anlor Winn Convention]].'' (OOC : Halloween 2020)''</span></small>
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 :— <q>NO!! I renounce you, cruel God who will take me from my beloved!</q>, unrestrained rage cursed through Maidakka's soul.
 :— <q>You love a servant of the false goddess more than yourself, battle and your people?! You dare to renounce me in death?!!</q> The voice of the god thundered down on Maidakka's soul.
-:— <q>YES!” she shouted with all her might.</q>
+:— <q>YES! she shouted with all her might.</q>
 :— <q>So be it! So you shall be with your beloved! </q>
 :— <q>As long as he lives and after his death you shall be an instrument of death even in death!</q>
-:— <q>But you shall experience the joys of battle only when you kill those whom you have loved!”<br>
+:— <q>But you shall experience the joys of battle only when you kill those whom you have loved!</q>{{Clear}}
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