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 <poem>    <big>☙</big> Since his grandmother's death, [[Apocamus Dradius]] was displaying a gloomy look. Eyebrows always furrowed, he often let out signs of annoyance and had lost the lightness that formerly used to be his charm. Of course, he was still conscientious about his duties, but you guessed he was filled with a lot of pent-up anger. There were even rumors in the Ranger camp that tempers had flared between him and [[Melga Folgore]].
-     Anyway, on that day of Thermis [[2614]], Apocamus went around the camp, enjoining the volunteer Rangers he met to follow him. When he had gathered a few dozen of them, they used a pact to transport themselves to the [[Cities of Intuition]], before marching together towards [[Hoï-Cho]]. Since I was fortunate enough to be part of this small party, I began to take these notes so that my comrades could preserve the memory of the expedition.
+     Anyway, on that day of Thermis [[2614]], Apocamus went around the camp, enjoining the volunteer Rangers he met to follow him. When he had gathered a few dozen of them, they used a pact to transport themselves to the [[Cities of Intuition]], before marching together towards [[Hoï-Cho (town)|Hoï-Cho]]. Since I was fortunate enough to be part of this small party, I began to take these notes so that my comrades could preserve the memory of the expedition.
      ''“Keep your ears open!”'', Apocamus ordered as we entered the city.

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 <poem>    <big>☙</big> Since his grandmother's death, [[Apocamus Dradius]] was displaying a gloomy look. Eyebrows always furrowed, he often let out signs of annoyance and had lost the lightness that formerly used to be his charm. Of course, he was still conscientious about his duties, but you guessed he was filled with a lot of pent-up anger. There were even rumors in the Ranger camp that tempers had flared between him and [[Melga Folgore]].
-     Anyway, on that day of Thermis [[2614]], Apocamus went around the camp, enjoining the volunteer Rangers he met to follow him. When he had gathered a few dozen of them, they used a pact to transport themselves to the [[Cities of Intuition]], before marching together towards [[Hoi-Cho]]. Since I was fortunate enough to be part of this small party, I began to take these notes so that my comrades could preserve the memory of the expedition.
+     Anyway, on that day of Thermis [[2614]], Apocamus went around the camp, enjoining the volunteer Rangers he met to follow him. When he had gathered a few dozen of them, they used a pact to transport themselves to the [[Cities of Intuition]], before marching together towards [[Hoï-Cho]]. Since I was fortunate enough to be part of this small party, I began to take these notes so that my comrades could preserve the memory of the expedition.
      ''“Keep your ears open!”'', Apocamus ordered as we entered the city.

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-<poem>    <big>☙</big> Since his grandmother's death, [[Apocamus Dradius]] was displaying a gloomy look. Eyebrows always furrowed, he often let out signs of annoyance and had lost the lightness that formerly used to be his charm. Of course, he was still conscientious about his duties, but you guessed he was filled with a lot of pent-up anger. There were even rumors in the Ranger camp that tempers had flared between him and Melga Folgore.
+<poem>    <big>☙</big> Since his grandmother's death, [[Apocamus Dradius]] was displaying a gloomy look. Eyebrows always furrowed, he often let out signs of annoyance and had lost the lightness that formerly used to be his charm. Of course, he was still conscientious about his duties, but you guessed he was filled with a lot of pent-up anger. There were even rumors in the Ranger camp that tempers had flared between him and [[Melga Folgore]].
-     Anyway, on that day of Thermis 2614, Apocamus went around the camp, enjoining the volunteer Rangers he met to follow him. When he had gathered a few dozen of them, they used a pact to transport themselves to the Cities of Intuition, before marching together towards Hoi Cho. Since I was fortunate enough to be part of this small party, I began to take these notes so that my comrades could preserve the memory of the expedition.
+     Anyway, on that day of Thermis [[2614]], Apocamus went around the camp, enjoining the volunteer Rangers he met to follow him. When he had gathered a few dozen of them, they used a pact to transport themselves to the [[Cities of Intuition]], before marching together towards [[Hoi-Cho]]. Since I was fortunate enough to be part of this small party, I began to take these notes so that my comrades could preserve the memory of the expedition.
      ''“Keep your ears open!”'', Apocamus ordered as we entered the city.

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      ''“[[Melga Folgore|Melga]] informed me that you would honor me with a visit."
      "The honor is ours, venerable Han! How are you?"
-     "Oh, I'm doing as well as a centenarian can! But I worry about you. These are troubled times for the Rangers. And I remain grieved by the brutal loss of [[Orphie Dradius|Orphie]].”''
+     "Oh, I'm doing as well as a centenarian can! But I worry about you. These are troubled times for the Rangers. And I remain grieved by the brutal loss of [[Orphie Dradius|Orphie]]<ref>[[Ultimate Quest]]</ref>.”''
      Apocamus sighed briefly, then replied through clenched teeth:
      ''“Brutal, yes. And unexplained! You don't know how hard I try to contain my anger. But with a sense of duty and discipline being the most important things to me, I manage.”''

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 <poem>    <big>☙</big> Since his grandmother's death, [[Apocamus Dradius]] was displaying a gloomy look. Eyebrows always furrowed, he often let out signs of annoyance and had lost the lightness that formerly used to be his charm. Of course, he was still conscientious about his duties, but you guessed he was filled with a lot of pent-up anger. There were even rumors in the Ranger camp that tempers had flared between him and Melga Folgore.
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-:in ''Ranger Bulletin #17'' of 2615-1-12-26
+:in ''Ranger Bulletin #17'' of 2615-1-12-26 <ref>*[https://app.ryzom.com/app_forum/index.php?page=topic/view/31838/1 Forums » <nowiki>[Ranger]</nowiki> » The words of Han Kiou]</ref>
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 "I'm a little worried about following a complete stranger, who doesn't know anything about our countries..."
 "But it is not decided yet! It's premature to talk about it. Tell yourself that, at least, it will be exciting to hear what he has to say about the situation in the Old Lands."
-"Hmm... You are right, but I would rather see our expectations fulfilled, that we can bounce back. Anyway.... With your words you have given us something to meditate on at length, which we will certainly do with the help of the Cube of Precepts, as Wuaoi taught us. Thank you very much Han Kiou, venerable Ranger!"
+"Hmm... You are right, but I would rather see our expectations fulfilled, that we can bounce back. Anyway.... With your words you have given us something to meditate on at length, which we will certainly do with the help of the Cube of Precepts, as [[Wuaoi Yai-Zhio|Wuaoi]] taught us. Thank you very much Han Kiou, venerable Ranger!"
 "It is I who thank you, young instructor! Lao... will you allow me now?"
 "Please, what?"