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Storys of Atys-002

Earth-Date

2017.02.23

Author

Giselher, Squire of the Tyneetryk's Tears Guild

Inscription

To my revered Guild-Leader Teeneemai, who is in my heart the only true Queen.

Title

The rescuing of Giselher

The first day on the Mainlands: The Tryker Capital Fairhaven

After the arriving in Fairhaven, the capital of the region Liberty Lake, on a very nice and sunny day, Lady Teeneemai wanted to reach the location Winds of Muse to start the training at the next morning with her new young guildy. So she said: „Giselher, follow me strictly! I want to lead you to the place, which is called Winds of Muse. Don‘t attack any creature, they are all very dangerous!“

Lady Teeneemai and Giselher after the Rescue

I tied myself to her, so I followed her. She brought us over fantastic beaches and wonderful lagunes. On our way we passed a Fjord in the north of Fairhaven by swimming between the high cliffs. Suddenly something unusual happened: Instead to go on following my Lady Teeneemai, I was standing 200m over the water at the top of the cliff. It was no longer possible to following her further. As I looked around, there were everywhere a lot of aggressive Cloppers. I realised quickly that any movement would be very dangerous. I couldn‘t leave this place anymore.

The Lady Teeneemai said: „Don‘t try to escape, keep quiet and wait for me, Giselher! I will find a beach, where we can leave that Isle.“ With growing concern, I watched the Cloppers, which were moving from time to time a little, while I was waiting. With the face of fear I got an Idea: Maybe I could escape by using the speed up, which I had learned on Silan weeks ago. From my position I couldn‘t see any real exit from „my“ Isle; One should know, that it is not possible to leave just an isle at any place, because there are a lot of cliffs; No, it was needed to find special beaches to reach the water. After some minutes Lady Teeneemai was still missing and I began to think, that maybe the moment has arrived for an attempt to escape of my own.

I started to run in a direction near the cliff border, where I had seen a gap by the rows of the Cloppers. In spite of the gap some of the Cloppers did focussed me; I couldn‘t see them at the side, but I heard them coming: „clapclapclap...“. So I started the speed up and began to sprinting to the beach.

Lady Teeneemai: "My dear Giselher, here I am!"

But when I reached that place, I realised, that there wasn‘t a beach, just another cliff and there wasn‘t an exit from the Isle! In panic I tried to find a path along the cliff border, but on this way there appeared more and more Cloppers. The speed up burned out, they caught me up. One hit, two hits, many hits; Several blows struck me… The Game was over!

My last thoughts were on my Queen Teeneemai: She couldn‘t reach me at my position with all these Cloppers around; This would have been too dangerous! So I said to her: „My Queen, it was my fault; Don‘t try to find me any longer to resurrect me. It will be to dangerous… Better one of us will stay alive. I will go to respawn...“ But Lady Teeneemai answered loud: „NO! Don‘t do it, Giselher. I‘ve told you that I would come! And I will just do it! I‘ve told you, wait for me! So, just do it!“

I swallowed, I had not belonged on her… Now I was lying here with the sounds of angels. While I‘m watching my body, that was lying in the gras, I noticed a noise of thunder: Many green flashes were around and suddenly I was alive again! All enemys were dead! …I was standing and looked into the eyes of my lovely Queen Teeneemai…