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--[[User:Tryroamer|Tryroamer]] ([[User talk:Tryroamer|talk]]) 13:54, 16 April 2020 (CEST) | --[[User:Tryroamer|Tryroamer]] ([[User talk:Tryroamer|talk]]) 13:54, 16 April 2020 (CEST) | ||
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I don't udnerstand, all what you say is already in the article. Except your version is longer and harder to understand, imho | I don't udnerstand, all what you say is already in the article. Except your version is longer and harder to understand, imho | ||
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Daily missions are a way how to incite player to perform regular missions with additional daily rewards. It is a list of up to 7 various missions created randomly according to your preferences. The list is automatically renewed every 20 hours and, besides a regular reward for each mission (dappers and/or fame), you have the choice of additional rewards. | Daily missions are a way how to incite player to perform regular missions with additional daily rewards. It is a list of up to 7 various missions created randomly according to your preferences. The list is automatically renewed every 20 hours and, besides a regular reward for each mission (dappers and/or fame), you have the choice of additional rewards. | ||
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Daily missions are provided to encourage each player to perform each day additional missions that rewards to match options that they, themselves, get to choose from a list of possible mission types. Based on those choices a list of up to 7 missions gets created each day (which gets automatically refreshed every 20 hours) by which the player can earn a regular reward for each mission (dappers and/or fame), or other additional rewards. | Daily missions are provided to encourage each player to perform each day additional missions that rewards to match options that they, themselves, get to choose from a list of possible mission types. Based on those choices a list of up to 7 missions gets created each day (which gets automatically refreshed every 20 hours) by which the player can earn a regular reward for each mission (dappers and/or fame), or other additional rewards. | ||
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second suggestion: Daily missions 'is NOT a list of up to 7 various missions' ... they are actual missioins, provided anew every 20 hours | second suggestion: Daily missions 'is NOT a list of up to 7 various missions' ... they are actual missioins, provided anew every 20 hours | ||
--[[User:Tryroamer|Tryroamer]] ([[User talk:Tryroamer|talk]]) 22:08, 16 April 2020 (CEST) | --[[User:Tryroamer|Tryroamer]] ([[User talk:Tryroamer|talk]]) 22:08, 16 April 2020 (CEST) | ||
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| + | * <q>Daily missions 'is NOT a list of up to 7 various missions' ... they are actual missions, provided anew every 20 hours</q> you are rigt, Tryro, but the nuance is really slight! 😃 | ||
| + | * <q>do not use 'incite' rather use 'encourage'</q> once again a slight nuance... | ||
| + | In both cases you do not need, IMO, to make a bu=ig discussion for such minor changes, I don't think Moniq would disagree if you make them without asking. *hugs* to you both. | ||
| + | --[[User:Dorothée|Dorothée]] ([[User talk:Dorothée|talk]]) 09:34, 18 April 2020 (CEST) | ||
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Revision as of 08:34, 18 April 2020
this version seems not to have in been influenced by the .odt [[1]] i uploaded by way of suggesting changes to the texts For example: as the initial text i suggested...: Daily missions are provided to encourage each player to perform each day additional missions that rewards to match options that they, themselves, get to choose from a list possible mission types. Based on those choices a list of up to 7 missions gets created each day (which gets automatically refreshed every 20 hours) by which the player can earn a regular reward for each mission (dappers and/or fame), or other additional rewards.
--Tryroamer (talk) 13:54, 16 April 2020 (CEST)
I don't udnerstand, all what you say is already in the article. Except your version is longer and harder to understand, imho
--Moniq (talk) 16:38, 16 April 2020 (CEST) Daily missions are a way how to incite player to perform regular missions with additional daily rewards. It is a list of up to 7 various missions created randomly according to your preferences. The list is automatically renewed every 20 hours and, besides a regular reward for each mission (dappers and/or fame), you have the choice of additional rewards.
<-- my suggestion in its entire length was:
Daily missions are provided to encourage each player to perform each day additional missions that rewards to match options that they, themselves, get to choose from a list of possible mission types. Based on those choices a list of up to 7 missions gets created each day (which gets automatically refreshed every 20 hours) by which the player can earn a regular reward for each mission (dappers and/or fame), or other additional rewards.
first suggestion essential: do not use 'incite' rather use 'encourage' for 'incite to riot' is a not to be welcomed negative coloration surely coming immediately to mind of any EN reader second suggestion: Daily missions 'is NOT a list of up to 7 various missions' ... they are actual missioins, provided anew every 20 hours --Tryroamer (talk) 22:08, 16 April 2020 (CEST)
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Daily missions 'is NOT a list of up to 7 various missions' ... they are actual missions, provided anew every 20 hours
you are rigt, Tryro, but the nuance is really slight! 😃 -
do not use 'incite' rather use 'encourage'
once again a slight nuance...
In both cases you do not need, IMO, to make a bu=ig discussion for such minor changes, I don't think Moniq would disagree if you make them without asking. *hugs* to you both. --Dorothée (talk) 09:34, 18 April 2020 (CEST)
